Your analysis is amazing and the way you portrayed your ideas was well done. However, try to go into more detail with your ideas. Doing that will allow you to improve your ideas to a point where you explore lots of ideas over one issue. Very well written though! xx
You've summarised the opening of Three Colours Blue and explained why sound is most important when creating a story through moving image. You've described what happens in the shots. Could feature pictures and deeply annotate the shot sizes/angles - explain why this shot has been used? What does it suggest?
You've mention the effect it has on the viewer's and you understood the plot well. You could have expanded the analysis by going into deeper details and mentioning why you think the director chose to do things in certain ways.
You've done well with explaining the storyline and analysing parts of it. You also mention the characters. I like the points you have given on the opening sequence!
What would be better is that you could have mentioned how powerful the sound is against the actual opening sequence - why does the drip of the brake line affect the viewers and create tension?
Somewhat brief and limited in the use of Media terminology. I will be expecting you to write in greater detail and demonstrate that you are using more of the terminology which you know from GCSE.
This is basic level and we are looking to move to proficient.
Your analysis is amazing and the way you portrayed your ideas was well done.
ReplyDeleteHowever, try to go into more detail with your ideas. Doing that will allow you to improve your ideas to a point where you explore lots of ideas over one issue.
Very well written though! xx
good analysis on the the trailer
ReplyDeleteebi:
analyse the storyline itself
mention the camera shots used and how effective it was
You've summarised the opening of Three Colours Blue and explained why sound is most important when creating a story through moving image. You've described what happens in the shots. Could feature pictures and deeply annotate the shot sizes/angles - explain why this shot has been used? What does it suggest?
ReplyDeleteYou've mention the effect it has on the viewer's and you understood the plot well. You could have expanded the analysis by going into deeper details and mentioning why you think the director chose to do things in certain ways.
ReplyDeleteYour ideas are clear- maybe try to expanding it more.
ReplyDeleteWell Done!!!
You've done well with explaining the storyline and analysing parts of it. You also mention the characters. I like the points you have given on the opening sequence!
ReplyDeleteWhat would be better is that you could have mentioned how powerful the sound is against the actual opening sequence - why does the drip of the brake line affect the viewers and create tension?
Overall well done though! (:
Somewhat brief and limited in the use of Media terminology. I will be expecting you to write in greater detail and demonstrate that you are using more of the terminology which you know from GCSE.
ReplyDeleteThis is basic level and we are looking to move to proficient.